This part in my book took the longest for me to develop, and I found it really difficult to draw a city landscape. It took me numerous times on Photoshop before I decided on a final one (shown above). I couldn't quite grasp the right perspective- hence all those unfinished spreads!
With the 2 previous spreads before this scene, my illustrations seem rounded and soft, and when it came to doing the rough edges of the buildings I felt uncomfortable- maybe this translated through the work. But lesson learnt, either the urban setting isn't for me to draw, or I just need to practice with this environment.